Review Detail of Sudoku in A Legacy Continued
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Author here, giving a shameless 5 star review after chapter 61. Il also take this opportunity to explain some thoughts below. So I kinda started this story on a whim. I have not written anything since college, and even that was more for a newspaper, so needless to say, this is my first real attempt at any real storytelling. And you can kinda tell in the earlier chapters if I’m honest. Quality has improved and we’re constantly over 2k word chapters now. Also, I’m not trying to hype anything up, but I got some good storylines planned out that I’m confident nobody should be able to guess, even having played the games and watched/read all the HP media. I will admit though, that my story is gonna be very long. You might’ve been able to tell from my prophecy, but I got a few OCs to introduce still ahaha. We’re at 132k words/61 chapters, and I have over 300 chapters planned (at least lol). We’ve finished reintroducing a lot of the main HP characters at this point (chapter 61) also developing and introducing their relationships with our MC. He is basically done catching up with the current situation. So canon changes are starting to occur. And I don’t want to spoil too much, but I will say that if my plans work out properly, this will be a completely different Harry Potter AU by the time I’m through with it. Anyways, even though it’s a bit long, I hope you give this story a chance and read up to the end of the first intro volume. It gets better (in my humble opinion) and I promise, it’ll keep getting better [img=recommend]
A Legacy Continued
Sudoku
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Tyvm! Very kind 🙏. I’m trying my best! Also ngl but I’m super excited to start writing the later parts I have planned out. One of my biggest issues when I got into writing this novel was essentially where I wanted to take it when I started messing with canon. But I got the meat of it fleshed out now and my outline alone is like 40 pages ahaha. Also, small spoilers, but I’m planning on taking this AU more global. [img=recommend]
Morgan_Sinn_2309:Looking forward to everything you have planned. It’s a novel concept and I’m not just saying that as it’s one of the first to be done. Your ideas that you have fleshed out so far have been well put together
Ohh, I’m more interested now haha. Also how tall is Jordan Khan? Is he still growing, what are the consequences of having all that ancient magic. I know some of the side effects are his emotions being everywhere and harder to control. But does the magic make his body any different? Like does he have more magical resistance for instance? Does he get taller?
Sudoku:Tyvm! Very kind 🙏. I’m trying my best! Also ngl but I’m super excited to start writing the later parts I have planned out. One of my biggest issues when I got into writing this novel was essentially where I wanted to take it when I started messing with canon. But I got the meat of it fleshed out now and my outline alone is like 40 pages ahaha. Also, small spoilers, but I’m planning on taking this AU more global. [img=recommend]
We’ll get to the ancient magic consequences probably after we introduce some OCs, but I will say that it is somewhat unique. Also Jordan Khan is somewhere between Cedric and Krum in height. I won’t say anything else because that’ll def spoil things ahaha 🤣
Morgan_Sinn_2309:Ohh, I’m more interested now haha. Also how tall is Jordan Khan? Is he still growing, what are the consequences of having all that ancient magic. I know some of the side effects are his emotions being everywhere and harder to control. But does the magic make his body any different? Like does he have more magical resistance for instance? Does he get taller?
Charles_Picard:Please save your story outline on more then just your computer in case it breaks don’t want to lose an as good ff as this one and keep up the work and you should add a pp on patri. On in case people want to help you
Fleur is confirmed 1 of them. The others I’m not sure yet. But Hermione, Susan, Luna, Daphne and Ginny are considerations and currently in the mix for now
a_BMO:Do you know who the romantic interests are yet, if you do could you spoil me?
Sudoku:Fleur is confirmed 1 of them. The others I’m not sure yet. But Hermione, Susan, Luna, Daphne and Ginny are considerations and currently in the mix for now
