The fanfic itself have a lot of potential but unfortunately the story is tailed badly no background without finishing scenes skipping a lot and leave a backlash of the character development standed till chapter 23 will drop it! Have a nice day all hoo read it!!!!!!
Sudoku
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LIKESudoku:Thanks for the fair review. I do recommend reading til the end of volume 1, as it’s going to be a long novel, and character development takes time.