Review Detail of Rubi_Stone in The north
Review detail
A very poorly managed story. Author has no knowledge how to start (only a tiny idea about "it should be intresting to write") or what to make for keeping his readers interested. And I don't even mention writing quality (such crazy sentences that you doubt author even having basic logic). Maybe, after a few years of work on this story, could bring it ro the list of decent ones, but for now it's utter garbage
The north
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Thanks for the review and I would like to contradict you, but obviously the first volume is just as you described. The ideas were there, but I didn't know how to manage them and about the grammar I don't deny it, my main language is not English making sentences or expressions confusing going through the translator. Still, thanks for the review!