Review Detail of Tbyte in (I’m still rewriting this) Dead Redemption: The Baba Yaga

For those who put this fanfic on your collection, I'm sorry if it's took too long, because I feel this novel can be good if I cook it more. From dialog, monolog, poin of view, john power, info slip/info dump, etc Because I need to earn from this, thats mean I need to put my heart writing my creation. Beside, I writing my original novel too. That's why sometime I write my original one and cooking this fanfic again from time to time. In comment section I gonna put some of my original paragraf and another fanfic I write in between, when I kinda stuck with my original one. Sorry for the inconvenience. Yours truly, Tbyte.