Review Detail of Curios_Theories in (I’m still rewriting this) Dead Redemption: The Baba Yaga

Item: (I’m still rewriting this) Dead Redemption: The Baba Yaga
Rating: 5

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Curios_TheoriesLv11yrCurios_Theories

What can I say from the little I have read, a good story with great potential to grow and be something much better, I like that there is no harem, it is not that I dislike it but it is already tiring to see it all the time A not-so-seen premise (at least it's not something I can easily find) and I really like how you handle John, a great fic I have to say and have a good day author: D

(I’m still rewriting this) Dead Redemption: The Baba Yaga

Tbyte

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TbyteAuthorTbyte

Thank you for the review, I'll try my best with my writing, sorry if sometimes it didn't meet the expectation. have a good day too, Curios

1yr

TbyteAuthorTbyte

to be honest, I felt chapters one - three had too many descriptive words and needed things. I don't know I just don't get the 'feeling' when I read it again, I think I need to revise it... well, at least I tried. anyway sorry for my rumbling

1yr