Review Detail of Kono_Timoda in In the world of ONE PIECE with Gamer system
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The idea is good but the writing style is so childish, and it feels like the writer is writing dialogue and thoughts for the first time. Would not recomend. Tip to the author: there is nothing wrong with having a stupid MC but you have to make him interesting and likable or else your story will be boring.
In the world of ONE PIECE with Gamer system
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Yeah it's because it's his first novel why I give it a low /mid rating. Don't you think higher quality works should have a higher rating? And lets be honest, how many times have you read a story that is between 4.0 and 4.6 and thought that it would be good but it turned out to be meh or trash? It takes some form of self awareness to improve, so I rate it what I think it's worth. Am I saying that this story will never turn out good? No, the author can always better themself and make a master piece but from what I have seen currently, and comparing it to other works that I think deserve 4.8 and above, that review is how good I think it is
Well said my guy, the author needs some critique to improve and I pretty much like the plot but the author needs some improvement in writing, I'm rooting for you author and I hope this critique does not discourage you from writing because everybody needs to start somewhere right ?.
Kono_Timoda:Yeah it's because it's his first novel why I give it a low /mid rating. Don't you think higher quality works should have a higher rating? And lets be honest, how many times have you read a story that is between 4.0 and 4.6 and thought that it would be good but it turned out to be meh or trash? It takes some form of self awareness to improve, so I rate it what I think it's worth. Am I saying that this story will never turn out good? No, the author can always better themself and make a master piece but from what I have seen currently, and comparing it to other works that I think deserve 4.8 and above, that review is how good I think it is
Yep, I would go as far to say that this is only worth 2 starts based on writing style alone but I gave it 3 stars for the author's daring ness to do a stupid MC in a predominantly OP/genius MC dominated media platform.
Hayden_W4lker:Well said my guy, the author needs some critique to improve and I pretty much like the plot but the author needs some improvement in writing, I'm rooting for you author and I hope this critique does not discourage you from writing because everybody needs to start somewhere right ?.