Review Detail of LordSirius in Demon Emperor's Rise: Becoming The Greatest Villain For My Daughter

This is a nice story. The plot of the story is interesting, I have no complaints about it. The plot of trying to kill a God to be with the mc's daughter is similar to the cliche of an mc trying to save/reunite with a love interest which I think is overused or maybe the ones with that cliche performed it badly but for this story I don't mind it. But, there are some problems like Grammer, where I'm confused at some parts. Another problem is that the mc doesn't seem to act like a middle-aged man and an assassin. He is an assassin but acts like a swordsman going head to head with his opponents. apart from the problems I said, this novel is a good one to read.