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Pay attention here before you start. This is my first review for this work, and obviously, it won't be detailed since I've read up to chapter 5. But I've come here to clarify a few things and to obviously call the author out. In the first chapter (aux) it is stated that there's no Goku, only a female version with a similar background. However, people will be confused seeing a character that is clearly Goku since it's even named as such. The author talks and describes Goku implying as a girl, but pronouns keep changing between he/she him/her and at first, I was confused as to why. But after reading a few Brazilian words/slangs (Portuguese–BR) I think that the reason for many grammatical errors is due to being written in Portuguese and then being translated. Probably MTL since a human translating would remove or replace the slangs for something similar. I'm currently considering whether to continue reading. If I do. I comeback updating this review and I give comments or errors I might find.

(rewrite)Biokinetic Ability in Dragon ball

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