Review Detail of Beardy in (rewrite)Biokinetic Ability in Dragon ball

Item: (rewrite)Biokinetic Ability in Dragon ball
Rating: 4

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BeardyLv141yrBeardy

Though you have what could be a solid FF there is a few teething issues, mainly the flow of the story is a little off putting. PS. Bio-kinetic is about the manipulation of energy and not biology, either you have misunderstood the abilities or your title is wrong. If you need to know what Bio-kinetic is, search about Gambit from Marvel or Hisoka Morow from Hunter x Hunter. All the best.

(rewrite)Biokinetic Ability in Dragon ball

Kaioshin

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BeardyLv14Beardy

One example… do some research… there is a whole website dedicated to this stuff.

Genn_stars:??? gambit's not a biokinetic, Elixir from marvel is a biokinetic, Panacea from Worm is a biokinetic.

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Genn_starsLv3Genn_stars

??? gambit's not a biokinetic, Elixir from marvel is a biokinetic, Panacea from Worm is a biokinetic.

5mth