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Laindesh21
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An excellent story. Characters are all fun, and gets better over time. Great comedy, with sprinkles of action, drama, tension etc etc. The yuri is very much there. There's a bit too much text fillers (like alot of previous chapter as start of next chapter, too much character descriptions) but its all minor issues really. I'd say this is an absolute must read story.

Abyssal Chronicles

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Laindesh21
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No worries, i really like this novel. It has heart put into it. Looking forward to find out what happens next :x

Hail_The_loli:Thanks, i will try to fix the the mistakes that you mentioned, as after a week i will reedit some chapters, if there is anything else pls point them out.
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Hail_The_loli
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Thanks, i will try to fix the the mistakes that you mentioned, as after a week i will reedit some chapters, if there is anything else pls point them out.

Hail_The_loli
Hail_The_loliAuthorHail_The_loli

Laindesh21:No worries, i really like this novel. It has heart put into it. Looking forward to find out what happens next :x