Review Detail of Neph1s in The Cursed Daemon: Retribution of the lightning Meta.

There are some mistakes here and there, and the plot and overall pace of the story are really confusing and got me re-reading paragraphs for a while, but the concept behind the story is well thought out. Maybe more attention to explaining details or slowing down the pace could work better for the novel. The grammar is fine, I didn't notice any big mistakes that ruined part of the immersion for me. Keep it up, author! Some fixes here and there and it'll be a great novel!