Review Detail of Dominus_Imperius in Harry Potter: Novice Swordsman

This is a proper "not for everyone" work so, beware. If you're into it, the writing quality is superb which astounds me as usually something like this fc would have some broken english or similar stuff. The character description and even development is excellently detailed. Seriously, I was not expecting such quality from such a "niche" fanfic.