Review Detail of Ironize97 in Brothel Manager : Unexpected Encounter with A Hidden Family Heirloom

Item: Brothel Manager : Unexpected Encounter with A Hidden Family Heirloom
Rating: 4.6

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Ironize97Lv141yrIronize97

I really like the story but can’t understand the money-system… the story writing is okay but there are lot of grammar errors.

Brothel Manager : Unexpected Encounter with A Hidden Family Heirloom

PeterPan

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Ironize97Lv14Ironize97

Oh ok but keep going bro, I like the story, is very interesting :)

1yr

PeterPanAuthorPeterPan

I used the local money system. Please bear for few more chapters, I will change it to American dollars as the hero character develops. As for the grammar mistakes... I promise that it will be improved in the future. Thank you for your support.

1yr

PeterPanAuthorPeterPan

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