Review Detail of PickleMe in Singularity in Primal Chaos [Completed]
Review detail
started high and went down low. I don't have a problem with harems nor the MC wanting one the start of this novel gave the impression of a calm collected person that actually values relationships to an extent. I don't know if it's because it's meatball novel or just poor character designs and plot building but the MC at the moment is just scumche with knowledge of the novel and a "cheat". 90 chapters in and not one single major plot change, I would give it a full 1 star but it would be unfair to the good start it had.
Singularity in Primal Chaos [Completed]
meatball_san
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ironically the reason I am dissatisfied the most isn't the fact that it's harem or that he gets the women that scumche already got. the female leads are hallow, the relationships they have is shallow, the only person who even got a barely decent amount of screen time with the MC is jasmine. I don't fault you for being a smut writer or for wanting all of them to get together. but it feels so rushed and the MC is so desperate for sex it's honestly pathetic. I certainly believe you can do better than this even though you might not want to, and you are in the end entitled to your own way of writing just as I am entitled to comment on it
meatball_san:The major problem with this novel I would say is that it's not planned, as for mc being scum, yep, stop reading chinese novels I would say.
