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Review Detail of Green_Lon in The Legendary Janitor

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The story is filled with unnecessary details that doesn’t help with the story progression.I read till 67th chapter but the story hasn’t moved much. My advice to author would be to trim the unnecessary fillers and streamline the story a bit.

The Legendary Janitor

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