Review Detail of vimbaimurindagomo in The Exiled Lady's Rumoured Tyrant.

It's a very fast paced powerful story that grips the imagination. I noticed though a couple of anomalies which I did not want to point out on the general chat. Namely a weakness with regard to diction. In chapter 32 there is a line where you say"...left chest..." The same anomaly is repeated again in another passage. Maybe you wanted to say, "left hand side of his chest". All the same notwithstanding you have an amazing story which fully immerses the reader in the fast moving story. I advise you take time to proof read your work. Congratulations on producing an outstanding masterpiece and I wish you well at the premiere of your book. Well done.