Writing quality- 3/5. It is readable, but there are minor grammar mistakes. Updating stability- I do not know how many chapters he will upload per week, but right now he has updated two chapters today. I assume he will upload more during this week, so - 5/5. Story Development- 5/5. The story so far is very good, just gotta work on conversations along with refining the character’s’ personalities. Character Design- 5/5. I love the mc, he isn’t overly kind so as to always save the weak (meaning he isn’t all hero type), nor is he a villain that sets out to destroy everything. A good neutral character, I personally like it! World Background- 3/5. Not much information to go by, author-san should work on world building, introduce new places, give descriptions of the world, add more detail to the world background, etc. For now, it will be at 3/5, I might change my mind later on and raise this review to 5/5, but for now: 4.2/5 ⭐️ So far, it is a great novel, I really recommend giving it a read.
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