Review Detail of Solomon_Rivers in The path to eternity

This is a very good story, there is some things you can work on but since you mentioned that you will be fixing them in the future I won't get into that. What I really like about your story is that it isn't just mindless scrible, characters are logicaly writen, the world building is fantastic, there is some nice humour added into the mix. So all in all I think this will be a very interesting read in the future.