Disclaimer: I only read up to Chapter 18.What I liked: The start was great. And I especially appreciate the effort of Author to write well. Some parts may not translate well due to unnecessary flowy words, but the intent behind is always presented well.Why I stopped at Chapter 18: It's getting confusing, too many little details and not much getting explanations. I felt like the MC, very frustrated at having many questions and they're just piling up with no answers in sight.Why I still recommend you to give this a try: Like I said, it had a great start. And maybe I just gave up too early. Just because I can no longer follow, doesn't mean you can't too. Give it a go, it might get better and be exactly your cup of tea. And quite frankly, this novel is still a lot better than the majority out there. And I have the utmost respect for writers who can come up with the imagination and courage to publish their stories. Thanks for a good read and keep it up, Author! đœ
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