Review Detail of Be_novelish in nill1234

I like this new concept introduced here in the book. The language in the conversation between the people, among whom, while conversing respect is must, the way the author have presented it brings forward the reverence the speaker has towards the one whom he is speaking. Though there are other books too which do this, but they bring it forward in a way that it might become a hindrance for some people who are not of that surrounding to feel it, but this way brings it forward that almost everyone would understand it. But the emotions are not that elaborated in the story. Though the story development is nice till now, but a little more effort in describing the background and the emotions would bring out a great effect and help making the imagination, which a reader has in mind while reading, more vivid.