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The writing quality is quite engaging in some parts, but the author's lack of experience clearly shows in a lot of ways. The scene changes suddenly, and I feel like it lacks some depth to it. The MC was suddenly in another world after just a single paragraph. It happens fast, so it was quite disorienting for me. Not to mention the other things. The start of the chapter is not interesting at all. It was mostly boring until the demon showed up. The way the MC died is quite cliche, and it wasn't as comedic as the author definitely hoped to be. The cover is lackluster and can definitely use some help from an artist who knows how to letter a title. The synopsis is disorderly and hard to read. The author needs to format it, but not just that. I think the contents of the synopsis aren't interesting at all. This might sound nitpicky but I don't like how he put 'Chapter n' before every chapter name because the app already does that. It only makes the chapter titles look awful, in my opinion.

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