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Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv131yrAncient_Egyptian

Nothing much to say, I have read 40 chapters, and I only get the sad realization that I can not enjoy this novel unless the author takes it seriously. The novel start with the protagonist's transmigration event and waking up in his younger self of another timeline... And everything after this point is a disaster. He doesn't have a complete memory of any of his life for some reason but has enough personality traits to recognize himself and whatever is around him... He somehow spends one day in his new life and already caused a powerhouse family to hunt them down and send assassins after them. He brilliantly for no necessary reason choose to show his legendary sword to countless people stronger than him in a bet against a young master from an even stronger family and he bet his survivability on an unknown random stranger's personality and strength, that means if this stranger doesn't care about honors or the feelings of his disciple (his sister in this case) and chose to snatch the sword or left him to fend for himself or have no strength to make the others give up, then he would have been dead. His main way to get stronger is through killing, but instead of killing as much as he needs secretly to keep himself safe, he chose to publicly kill people without regard and caused various power to hunt him, claiming that this is better for him, but lo and behold he gets to a random restaurant to eat but some random sh!t wanted the table and this evolved into a death match over a fu@#$king table, and when he was about to die because a girl supported that sh!t at the end of the fight, he was saved by "surprisingly" his sister's master's other disciple who "happened to be" the restaurant owner... Oh, he for some "unknown reason" doesn't blame the beauty that supported the other sh!t for almost killing him. After being saved by the restaurant owner, he finds that a woman from an only-female sect that prohibited males from entering is horny as f@#$ and they have $e× in the middle of some forest. Mr. Author tells me, is my review unfair to you?

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Neptunus_97
Neptunus_97AuthorNeptunus_97

Sorry for just replying to your review, because my notification didn't come in at all. When I saw your profile I realized that you left a review for my novel. Well, thank you for the review you gave. I really accept it. Indeed, everyone has their own taste in reading. so I don't force all my readers to like my novel. If you like my novel, go ahead, if you don't like it, that's okay, you can read other novels.

Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13Ancient_Egyptian

Then I hope you would get the necessary inspiration to improve your novel. Good luck, and who knows maybe you would find a place in the top ranks.

Neptunus_97:Sorry for just replying to your review, because my notification didn't come in at all. When I saw your profile I realized that you left a review for my novel. Well, thank you for the review you gave. I really accept it. Indeed, everyone has their own taste in reading. so I don't force all my readers to like my novel. If you like my novel, go ahead, if you don't like it, that's okay, you can read other novels.
Neptunus_97
Neptunus_97AuthorNeptunus_97

Thank's 😘🙏😍

Ancient_Egyptian:Then I hope you would get the necessary inspiration to improve your novel. Good luck, and who knows maybe you would find a place in the top ranks.