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TimEaterOfWorlds
TimEaterOfWorldsLv151yrTimEaterOfWorlds

A pretty interesting concept with a nice storyline. Unfortunately the quality of the writing is rather poor, it seems like the authors grasp of the English language isn’t the best, which leads to much of what’s written not making much sense in the context of the story. Many things are not explained or explained very strangely, it’s still readable if you ignore parts of whats wrotten and just think through the flow of the story. Could have been a top tier novel if it was better written but still worth a read

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My Villain's System

Neptunus_97

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Neptunus_97
Neptunus_97AuthorNeptunus_97

🙏☺ I will

TimEaterOfWorlds:You’re welcome, it honestly improves quite a bit as the story goes on. Just gotta keep practicing and maybe edit the first few chapters as they’re a bit low quality and might dissuade some people from reading. Keep up the good work man
Neptunus_97
Neptunus_97AuthorNeptunus_97

Thank you, I will continue to improve my English.🙏

TimEaterOfWorlds
TimEaterOfWorldsLv15TimEaterOfWorlds

You’re welcome, it honestly improves quite a bit as the story goes on. Just gotta keep practicing and maybe edit the first few chapters as they’re a bit low quality and might dissuade some people from reading. Keep up the good work man

Neptunus_97:Thank you, I will continue to improve my English.🙏