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J_i_n_g_L_i_u
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Some of the Grammar are wrong and also it's makes me confused of them. And especially the Mc is kinda pathetic and also weak minded like a mind of a kid year old.

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ODISSEU
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Thanks for the review.Well, I won't deny the grammar part (it's horrible in those chapters, luckily I got 'editor').As for the personality, (probably the reason for the irritation and the protagonist being 'weak' compared to beings much stronger than him. and sometimes seem a little aimless).

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P.s, Referring to the idiotic comedy I put, the protagonist and apparently beaten for no reason. (One of the readers warned me that this is annoying and I made it smaller and it almost doesn't show up.)

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DaoistTranslator
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it is annoying indeed, that kind of comedy is already dead.

ODISSEU:P.s, Referring to the idiotic comedy I put, the protagonist and apparently beaten for no reason. (One of the readers warned me that this is annoying and I made it smaller and it almost doesn't show up.)
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DaoistTranslator
DaoistTranslatorLv13DaoistTranslator

also, it's no longer a comedy

ODISSEU:P.s, Referring to the idiotic comedy I put, the protagonist and apparently beaten for no reason. (One of the readers warned me that this is annoying and I made it smaller and it almost doesn't show up.)
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