Review Detail of Rishabh_Yadav_0127 in Fairy Tail: Shinigami

Can i ask you something author, I can understand that you like to give your MC a lot of plot armor, and i mean a lot or maybe all the time…., and i am okay with that, but cant you keep some hidden move or secret power in the MC which only the MC knows and not anyone else. I mean , in all the part of the story , everything is known about the MC to everyone , every move he makes , every power he has , etc. its like , he is not an MC but some character dancing like a puppet in someones hand all the time in the novel. He doesn’t even use his knowledge of fairy tale in the story for his advantage. It’s really frustrating . I like you writing quality a lot , but create a plot for the story is not your strong suit. Also his emotions, they change on drop . He feels like mentally challenged and not the type with terrible past, but actually genuinely emotionally challenged person!! I love your other work on the marvel and other story.. keep up the good work … I read your story because of your impeccable writing quality.. don’t loose that!! Thanks and best of luck!!