Review Detail of Alim_Yusmanto in Dragon Out of Time: Alduin's Misadventures in a DxD World

Lore and world building are very well thought and interesting. Character design is good it just the story moving too fast. The dialogue is too short so, we don't really get to know the character more or get the feeling of most dialogue. Slow down a bit and add bit more dialogue in character communication, it will be better imo. Not, only you have longer chapter with less lore and story material to unveil.