Review Detail of Kfer_Hans in DxD: Shadow Monarch

TLDR: grammar is trash, but story is conveyed despite this I’m not entirely sure if this is a translated piece or stolen or whatever, but it seems fine, at least for this website, except for one thing: Grammar. It’s not a problem of conveying imagery or descriptions, but the amount of elipsis is a little ridiculous, especially in the Grayfia bits. Also capitalization is an issue as well, punctuation too.