Review Detail of Cosmictear in one true evolutionary path - The one true myth breaker ( dropped )
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Hey man, this is a really good novel with great ideas. I can definitely see this going really far, even into money making contract land. You just need to work on Grammer and word structure. Other than that, your ideas are great.You said on the other review that you write through speech to text. You might want to go over each chapter in that case and read over it a few times before releasing. Other that, fantastic job author!
one true evolutionary path - The one true myth breaker ( dropped )
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I just finished your book and I must say it's amazing I give it a four out of five and personally if I were to give you an idea it would be from rise of the Omni science Paragon where Neil would send Moana around the world in the form of status windows giving practically every person respective power and controller for Mana kind of like Lucifer.
genisis_gaia_boss:I just finished your book and I must say it's amazing I give it a four out of five and personally if I were to give you an idea it would be from rise of the Omni science Paragon where Neil would send Moana around the world in the form of status windows giving practically every person respective power and controller for Mana kind of like Lucifer.