Hey :) I spent a lot of time polishing the prose and making sure there weren't any grammar mistakes, so you know it's going to be a smooth read. And the characters? They're so real you'll feel like you know them personally. I made sure to give them each their own unique quirks and personalities, so you'll be invested in their lives from the first chapter. The plot is tightly woven and full of twists and turns that feel natural and earned. I wanted to keep you guessing, but I didn't want anything to feel contrived. I think I struck the perfect balance between unpredictability and inevitability. Overall, I'm really proud of it, and I think you're going to love it. If you're looking for a well-written story that will keep you engaged from beginning to end, this is it!
Darkest_Sage
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LIKEExcept that you didn't polish the prose of check for any mistakes or make the characters believable. Because you didn't fucking write it. The ACTUAL title is "Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI]" over on the SpaceBattles Forum, where the story is complete, and really fucking good. So at least have the courtesy to say you're sharing the story to spread it, even if you didn't ask for permission. But no, you just decided to crib their work as yours. Classy.
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