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I read it on another site, so I can't say anything about the quality of the writing and translation, but I'll say a little about the plot. Previously, I gave up because of the stupidity of some situations and the fact that the relationship develops very crookedly and I did not like this aspect at all. As for stupid situations, I’ll write about those that I remember very well: the first is when the MC brought random adventurers to his secret base for no reason, in fact he first knocked them out, tied them up and sent them to the base, and after asking a few basic questions at the base, he immediately unleashed them and escorted straight from his "secret base". Of course, they later played some role in the plot, but such an introduction of characters and the development of the plot seems very strange to me. The second case is also related to his "secret" base. Somehow, his ender girl revealed his base to the son of a local landowner, and led him straight to the base. He wanted this base for himself and tried to capture it. And from that moment on, everything happened very chaotically for me: relationships deteriorated, a teenage drama began, then some stupid intrigue from the son of a local lord, and after that, a change of location to the capital (still in a state of drama). In general, this all happened very incomprehensibly to me, because some situations began without a proper introduction, and the whole drama of the situation seems very simulated and just stupid. There are some very controversial points in the capital itself too, but I don't remember well enough to write about it. But, according to my feelings, in terms of the confusion of situations and relationships, little has changed. So this story is not for me. (this review was written using google translate)

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Let's play Minecraft in a world of Swords and Spells (Rewritten)

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