Review Detail of Phelio_n_Craze in Bleach: Another Story

yes. Help me

now is 4.0 but still to low. i dont get it. thare are tags. and warnings why they read it .and later one complain and write .bad reviews. nobody force them.

the biggest problem with it was that as strong as the Mc is, he let's people beat him up when he could clearly win. it reads more like a crack fic, and the Mc acts to wacky cringe for seemingly no reason. the suspension of disbelief is just too much. it's a turn-off for the most part. and I think other people agree with me, or I'm just a weirdo.

It's true but it shouldn't get lower than 4 because there's many worst fic out there compared to this one

it's a 3 star. but I haven't given anything a 5 star. when I see a 4 or 5 star my expectations are high but then get disappointed. the story isn't bad but the bad parts are apparent enough. point is if it got rid of the cring and made the Mc less wacky it would be a 4star