Review Detail of Kono_Timoda in Bleach: Another Story

Honestly the pacing feels very weird and at times feels too fast the writing style feels clunky at times and some of the fights feel short-lived and unimpactful. I would like to see more World building and more in-depth conversation. One bleach fanfiction that has better execution (IMO) is: Degeneracy in Bleach World by Slander_ It's another bleach fanfiction but the World building is slower and the pacing feels more natural.