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Review Detail of Hashile in Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist

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Hashile
HashileLv131yrHashile

Low rate not because it represent the quality of the novel but because the rate rn is too high for what it is and the actual defects of the novel. First I have a big issue with the narration. I hate it when the conversation are "I've vanquished countless foes, you'll be one of many" when the talking guy is 20. I don't care if it's a cultivation or a wuxia novel, you need to integrate something in your head, author. When it come to cultivation in xianxia novel with immortals and all or training in murim type novel, or a mix like in this one it doesn't change the fact that the life experience are actually lower than when it come to mundane humans. Why? Because they're supposed to have passed a majority of their life training or cultivating, not fighting. Futhermore, beyond that, I just find it cringe to elevate yourself like this, it's just weird and I swear I've never read something like this in any other novel so it's even more unfamiliar and weird. The effort of making it as though it was some medieval setting with the conversation is also cringe seriously, things like "boundless strengh" and all are weirds, it's really hard to read and dismish the experience read a lot, really. Overall it's a good novel, as I said the low rate is just because the rate rn is too high for the low quality of the writing and the akwardness the author make me feel when I read this. Second issue is the politic in the novel, we can see the author is really trying but he's not good at it. There's a bad mix of empire, relegion and a lot of differents organization of differents size and it's not well-mixed, there's a lot of plot holes with the early part and within the empire itself the differents positions are bad-established, the author doesn't understand himself what he's writing and what it's supposed to mean. I won't give examples because I don't want to put this on "spoiler warning" but if you want some, ask away. So for these 2 points this novel should be rated lower, before it was not that big of an issue but it begin to be right now.

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Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist

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Hashile
HashileLv13Hashile

And just, I can't not empaphise more on the akwardness of the novel, if you want a 'son of luck' to elevate himself why not just write "anyway for .......... , as long as he survive today, he's sure to make Wang Jian pay in the future. he is confident because he had always been weaker than others and had been humiliated during several years but in the end he was the one who slapped the face of those who mocked him. Today he's weaker but what about tomorrow? His luck had always been good soon enough he's confident that he'll stumble upon a good opportunity that will allow him make a come back, turn the tide and kill Wang Jian in one fell swoop. ........(son of fortune): 30years hedong 30yeras hexi, don't bully the young into poverty' " but the author reduced this chinese tradition to "AHHH I've vainquished countless foes, you'll be one of many"... The author can take a chinese concept but can't take the chinese idioms? SO he just prefer to reduce to subpar quality... SAD

Hashile
HashileLv13Hashile

AH yeees, to highlight my first point, when you read a cultivation novel, when the character are elevated by themselves or by others, what is empaphised is the techniques they're cultivating, the physiques they have, their factual records, their position in their sect or their teachers. Never have I read something like "I've participed in countless war" in a novel like this, I swear it's weird, unfamiliar and poorly thought. Why? Because fighting exp is fighting exp, nothing else, it's not combat power.