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Review Detail of Taragorm in Harry Potter: The Beast Whisperer

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Alot of event explaining and not enough story telling early chaps but not a good start. I fear it will be just another fanfic that ruins its potential which it has in spades. Please dont just tell show instead dialougue, inner mc thoughts, etc. This happened that happened doth not make an enjoyable read. Writings hard all respect love idea of this

Harry Potter: The Beast Whisperer

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Thanks for your comments. I have tried harder in the latest chapter. Please read and let me know more on how i can improve on this.