Review Detail of WarlockMagus in GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

The start is really good I hope you continue this work. I hope you make the mc travel to all lands and find magic that he can use to strengthen himself his dragon and his family that he trusts. I haven't seen anyone try to unite the whole world into 1 empire and try to improve the world by getting rid of any current or future threats permanently. Also it will be really good if mc adds schools for commoners and improves hygiene and pregnancy births that are common sense in the modern world. Also dragons will grow more quickly with exercise, good diet and be free to roam around and not be locked up when they are old enough to fly and hunt.