All over the story progress is good but there is major draw back in the story as the protagonist is way to overpowered and the discriptions are not well briefed at all and the protagonists power does not make sense also you should extend and explain a something within 3-5 ch otherwise the story will not make it seem interesting. Try to make it harder for the protaganist to achieve goal
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