Review Detail of Lord_of_Endless in Singularity System

Item: Singularity System
Rating: 5

Review detail

Lord_of_EndlessLv41yrLord_of_Endless

All over the story progress is good but there is major draw back in the story as the protagonist is way to overpowered and the discriptions are not well briefed at all and the protagonists power does not make sense also you should extend and explain a something within 3-5 ch otherwise the story will not make it seem interesting. Try to make it harder for the protaganist to achieve goal

Singularity System

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Runscape_GuidesAuthorRunscape_Guides

It's not going to be harem.

Lord_of_Endless:Please don’t make it a harem

1yr

Lord_of_EndlessLv4Lord_of_Endless

Please don’t make it a harem

1yr

Lord_of_EndlessLv4Lord_of_Endless

I recommend you to read more works such as 1) Fate destroying Empror 2)Transmigration:Children of the plane 3)Heavenly Dao Chosen 4)Heaven Tribulation 5)Villain:The play of destiny And more join the discord server :by This app you can ask all the other writer as it will help you in making your works better

1yr

Runscape_GuidesAuthorRunscape_Guides

Thank you for the advice. Hope you can help out more like this since this is my first novel.

1yr