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Ya_buiie
Ya_buiieLv49mthYa_buiie

It's my first review and I can't believe it's one star. Anyway, the story was great in the first volume and the author had a writer's block and decided to end the story abruptly. Better than just ending it but I was still sour. Now on to the second volume, I just read the first 2 chapters and instantly wanted to stop it. The first volume just became a movie and a learning experience for the new mc who conveniently is the brother of another person who was also reincarnated as Kiba but died. All in all, a great read for the first volume if just believe the story ends there

Great...I'm A Devil Swordman (DxD)

Taidanotsumi

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Ya_buiie
Ya_buiieLv4Ya_buiie

yeah sorry for the rant, no hate to the author tho

Taidanotsumi
TaidanotsumiAuthorTaidanotsumi

It's fine, what you said is true. I'm just stuck and the plot hole in my story makes my motivation drop. So, sorry

Ya_buiie:yeah sorry for the rant, no hate to the author tho
Ya_buiie
Ya_buiieLv4Ya_buiie

Hey man, I'm not an author but I think you should probably make the second volume a whole new fanfic and, if you can, continue with the previous volume. The first one was one of the better fanfics of dxd tbh and I quite enjoyed it. Cheers to you mate and all the best. BTW if you feel slumped or just don't wanna do anything anymore, just take a break, even if it's long. We like the story but we care about you too bro. Stay blessed man

Taidanotsumi:It's fine, what you said is true. I'm just stuck and the plot hole in my story makes my motivation drop. So, sorry
Taidanotsumi
TaidanotsumiAuthorTaidanotsumi

Ya_buiie:Hey man, I'm not an author but I think you should probably make the second volume a whole new fanfic and, if you can, continue with the previous volume. The first one was one of the better fanfics of dxd tbh and I quite enjoyed it. Cheers to you mate and all the best. BTW if you feel slumped or just don't wanna do anything anymore, just take a break, even if it's long. We like the story but we care about you too bro. Stay blessed man
Subsy
SubsyLv12Subsy

Question. What was your thought process? Genuine question on volume 2.

Taidanotsumi:
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Taidanotsumi
TaidanotsumiAuthorTaidanotsumi

I was stuck really bad as my life also went a bit far worse for wear. So, I can't really say anything as I was complaining about everything in my life including my work, so i try to change it a lot but that don't work. But now I guess I have calm down and able to write another story. I guess I will return back to it after I'm confident to write it back. Bye, my reader

Subsy:Question. What was your thought process? Genuine question on volume 2.
Subsy
SubsyLv12Subsy

I’m impressed by your maturity, surprising coming from this platform. I hope you do fix the novel at your own pace. Thanks for replying.

Taidanotsumi:I was stuck really bad as my life also went a bit far worse for wear. So, I can't really say anything as I was complaining about everything in my life including my work, so i try to change it a lot but that don't work. But now I guess I have calm down and able to write another story. I guess I will return back to it after I'm confident to write it back. Bye, my reader
Taidanotsumi
TaidanotsumiAuthorTaidanotsumi

Subsy:I’m impressed by your maturity, surprising coming from this platform. I hope you do fix the novel at your own pace. Thanks for replying.