Review Detail of Kurama24 in Great...I'm A Devil Swordman (DxD)
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Read till latest chapter (29) also SPOILERS ahead: Cons: 1. Due to the many shift in scenes it feels really fast paced and it's hard to tell how many days passed by for the mc. 2. Not much has been said about Mc's past, 1st chapter just slaps u with a "It's been a week after i awoke as kiba" and that's it. We don't know if he inherited the memories, who the mc was or his personality. 3. The Mc's personality from his actions can be summarized to this: a reckless, blunt to the point of being rude (sometimes) training maniac with a slight chuuni side. If rizer was the anime version instead of LN version the mc would've been dead by now or seriously injured. 4. The mc focuses too much on gaining power (damage) but hasn't tried increasing his mana reserves which is his only weakness he is like a megumin but with a variety of explosions (Excalibur morgan, symbionblade, vortex blade, etc...) Pros: 1. No grammad mistakes at all, the writing is very clear. 2. The romance is bound to give u diabetes. 3. The mc doesn't mind changing canon if it means strengthening the peerage. 4. The slight au for the way the mc uses demonic energy for literally everything even though it's bs (we can say it's his goldenfinger for transmigrating). TLDR: Good fanfic just needs to be fleshed out more on the mc
Great...I'm A Devil Swordman (DxD)
Taidanotsumi
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Thanks for the suggestion. Also, I want to change it up a bit and not become exactly like the normal Transmigrate stuff. "I woke up in someone's body" And they started having panic attacks or something similar. I want to change it up a bit and keep MC's identity secret for now. But I really want to thank you for the suggestion. I may start to write again because my work is nearly finished. See you again.
No problem the only reason I'm not a fan of keeping his past a secret is bcz usually some authors do something called an a**pull example: A hacker is needed for this job? luckily the mc studied for 2 years about coding. It's like an author can just pin it on the unclear past whenever it's convenient🤣 Anyways keep up the good work
Taidanotsumi:Thanks for the suggestion. Also, I want to change it up a bit and not become exactly like the normal Transmigrate stuff. "I woke up in someone's body" And they started having panic attacks or something similar. I want to change it up a bit and keep MC's identity secret for now. But I really want to thank you for the suggestion. I may start to write again because my work is nearly finished. See you again.
Kurama24:No problem the only reason I'm not a fan of keeping his past a secret is bcz usually some authors do something called an a**pull example: A hacker is needed for this job? luckily the mc studied for 2 years about coding. It's like an author can just pin it on the unclear past whenever it's convenient🤣 Anyways keep up the good workimage
