Writing quality is well-written with no noticeable mistakes. The story development shows great potential and maintains an engaging pace. The author has a good understanding of DxD characters, which is reflected in their design and portrayal. The world background has sufficient details to immerse the reader. As for updating, I would give this fanfic a five-star rating as the author consistently provides new content, and it's offered for free. Overall, this is a good DxD fanfic. The main character is likable, although occasionally arrogant. While we know the MC won't die early due to their status as the protagonist, it's important to find a balance in his actions to maintain tension and suspense. The interactions between the MC and his future harem are enjoyable, particularly the moments with Akeno. (Note that I will provide another review once the chapter count reaches 30. In the meantime, please enjoy this image I have created for you.) (It's supposed to be Rias, but this is all I got)
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