Review Detail of Rafael_Loki in Surviving as the Second Main Lead: Second Lead's POV

I'ts bad. I can't understand the 5 star reviews. -name of mc keeps changing. -mc has high intelligence status, but it's a dumbest mf I ever see. -mc is 5y old with no cheat yet is thrown in a dungeon wo any reason. -mc don't remember a single thing from the novel he wrote, not even the freaking skill of major characters. - it's riddled with plotholes. seriously... rich lady in poor orphanage jus because her parents can't take care of her sometimes? ffs. - 3y old kids that behave like 12y and can run like the wind. - mc that after almost 3y think he still in a dream and will return home anytime now. - Not a single world building. There is guild, portals and monsters, but nothing that is shown because we need to follow the mc in some of the most mundane and brain dead adventures - There is much more, but whatever. The worse part is that the plot has potential, but is extremely wasted for a apparent lack of planning and editing. Also the author posted the same chap 2 times, effectively cutting part of the history. I usually just ignore novels I don't like, and I really like the premise. It's sad to see it wasted.