Review Detail of Blast_Niro in I just want to live

I plan to make the plot different as me move along. I had some ideas on why certain characters didn't make the right decisions and sometimes made decisions that didn't make sense. Of course those parts are very far away.

I see well as long as have concrete logic behind your change, won't close your mind to criticism and actually admit your mistakes and improve them when needed then this could be an amazing work