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pinfue
pinfueLv11yrpinfue

very well written. I just have one very small gripe with the paragraphing and the dialogue. Like I said in chapter 1 comments, the dialogue not being its own paragraph just made it harder to read. Other than that, its a good read.

The Devil's Accessory

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pinfue
pinfueLv1pinfue

could you help me complete the review swap? you've havent done mine yet

Novel_Dumre:Thank you
Novel_Dumre
Novel_DumreAuthorNovel_Dumre

Thank you

Novel_Dumre
Novel_DumreAuthorNovel_Dumre

Sorry I didn't see your message, I will do yours now

pinfue:could you help me complete the review swap? you've havent done mine yet