Review Detail of MZAF in 删除的故事

is this Harem?

author harem please stop avoiding the question

good work author. Give us more chapters.

I agree, the author did great work here so to speak the manner with which the world is seen from different perspectives according to people is one key element. The understanding that power comes only to those who work for it and at the same time to those who work for it but don't deserve it. The tragedy it relayed helped to accentuate the broad scope of the story as a whole and helped cause a total turn around. Honestly, I'm surprised why this doesn't have more views and much more deeper comments. It's a big investment in the characters displayed, truth be told the character writing was well fleshed out, but I would propose a moment of lonesomeness for the MC to better define who he is when not around others, the readers need to feel it not just be told.

Thanks for the review.I plan to focus solely on the main MC from chapter 23 onwards. As a 14 year old with newfound strength his world view is not yet entirely corrupted, but his naivety is apparent. My story tends to be slow paced because I don't want to just make my MC magically mature without any content .

Not a problem. I'm loving the realism. An innocent boy stands alone in a world of darkness and despair. He is surrounded by evil, and yet he still clings to his innocence. He is surrounded by a world that is filled with hatred and violence, yet he still strives to remain kind and compassionate. He is a beacon of hope in a world of darkness, and his courage and resilience are a reminder that even in the darkest of times, there is still good in the world. He is a symbol of hope, and his story is one of courage and strength, reminding us that even in the most difficult of times, we can still find light and love. It will be fun to watch him cling to his humanity however fleetingly small it may be in times of despair.