Review Detail of SoberanoSinNombre in People in Middle Earth: Slaying the Dragon at the beginning

3.6 STAR REVIEW, ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE. world background: it is based on tolkien's middle earth, i have nothing more to add. 5 stars. Character design: it is rare to see Thorin act like a Chinese young master, this section can be improved. 3 star. Development of the story: Very few chapters to comment on, for now I will give it 4 stars because it seems promising. Update stability: 50 chapters in 3 days, perfect, 5 stars. Writing quality: this section is terrible, lines that separate leaving blank spaces, names that change non-stop, and sentences that are unconnected or that make no sense. Much could be improved, 1 star