Aight, from my perspective, it's good. If you have any queries, then go ahead and ask here. Although it would be better if you comment and ask in paragraph comments or chapter comments, again it's up to you guys.Have a nice day!
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LIKEDemigod_of_All:Hmm, I'll start this one after ending My Demon Hunting System.
Miechol:Will Celestia become whole once again or will stay separated into those 7 fragments?