Review Detail of Ototsu_Yume in Rise of the Common Devil [DXD FanFic]

Sadly there are only six chapters written as of writing this but so far I find it impeccably structured and the story looks solid going forward, the only minor negatives I can see at present is the occasional spelling error which would easily be solved with any kind writing program that points out spelling mistakes. The fact the MC starts as a regular devil is also a rather unique spin on things although it is unfortunate that he's a servant. (not the evil pieces kind) but again, that's a unique starting point for an MC set in DxD as well. I sincerely look forward to how this novel progresses in the future and hope to see MC find someone to confide in eventually. (PS. Serafall best girl)