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unpocoloco
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The plot is quite something, to say the least. At first, I didn't get what was going on, but things started getting clear to me at the end of the second chapter. Great character design (Especially The traveler for me), not to mention the writing quality. The fighting scenes are really impressive as well. Keep it up ^^

Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds

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unpocoloco
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Idk I didn't finish the whole thing. I'll do my best to try and figure out what's missing in the story so you could put it into consideration

vorlefan:Thank you, in your opinion, what would be the point to improve?
vorlefan
vorlefanAuthorvorlefan

Thank you, in your opinion, what would be the point to improve?

vorlefan
vorlefanAuthorvorlefan

Sure xD

unpocoloco:Idk I didn't finish the whole thing. I'll do my best to try and figure out what's missing in the story so you could put it into consideration