this story has a lot of potential, but the problem is, first of all,the problem is the Mc his power level are not consistent so that one problem and secondly the story is not considered if I can say and not much info abt the world cuz rn it's pretty much a wish fulliment and him having all this skills and etc is fine and all but when he gets them and how would be nice to know and his power level dude it need adjustment cuz his should be by the first level of the 4 but his power is tier 2 I believe and how the God level sword make him so overpowered is boring tbh so pretty much you need to add more background fix the power level and add reasons for him growing in power his journey and stop making females fall in love because of his charm it make them feel empty and one sided
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