Review Detail of AithyEl in Leveling Up With My Pet

I really feel this novel is heading in a great direction. I think it’s fun and interesting. The world building is pretty good. I like all the characters so far. The biggest thing for me though is the grammar is not good. Dear author I think you should try to get a beta reader or something to help polish it up. But i otherwise highly recommend this novel! Can’t wait to see where it goes